This shows where I got specific with revision. I started out just saying that variation in workouts helps muscle growth but after feedback, I connected it to how wearables can actually show those changes in real time. That comment about smartwatches tracking fatigue made me realize I could be way clearer and more interesting. I stopped writing like I was guessing and started backing it up with actual examples. That shift is what revision felt like in this class not just fixing grammar, but making the writing sharper, more direct, and more connected to the bigger picture.